Tuesday 19 July 2011

She...

You walk into a room full of strangers,
You think you'll see her today,
She is the only thing on your mind,
When you step onto  the hallway. 
She's around you,somewhere,
She's playing games with you,
You can feel her presence,
Though you can't see her.
And you follow a light,
without knowing where it's gonna lead you to.
with hopes and love,
all you want is to see her face! 
She's already gotten into you,
Don't try to fight it.
It's in her eyes,
You've lost your heart,
and now you are a slave.
Admit it,there is no shame.
Love fills your body,mind and soul,
it's the key to your shackles,
and the things that you can't control.
Love sets you free,it gives u wings to fly.
With love,the world is yours,
and everything that comes with it!
Though you are a sinner,in her arms 
you are no more one!
You feel her in your shoulders,
These are moments to savor, 
You hold her in your arms
She's yours,tonight!
You  dance all night long,
Time slips by,like it used to,
As the sun begins to raise
You realize it's the break of dawn,
And you don't want to let go of her!
But she wants to,
Because she doesn't want him to know!
Your heart skips a beat,when you let go of her hand!
But,She promises that she'll see you tomorrow.... 










12 comments:

  1. Great... The poem sounds very real.. again 'your' should be 'you're' and 'use to' should be 'used to'

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  2. thanks a lot mam...yep i've corrected it... :)

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  3. Ena da..unfaithful la vara character mari iruku?? inspired from some one ah?

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  4. irukalam...btw,inspired illa brother,imaginary thaan... :)

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  5. lovely feel while reading....super cool writing bro...
    esp'4 th stanza...is super awesome:) (slave,shame...) keep d gud work going bro....

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  6. thanx a lot ajay!yep sure will do... :)

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  7. I luv the Lines
    " She's already gotten into you,
    Don't try to fight it.
    It's in her eyes,
    You've lost your heart,
    and now you are a slave."

    It penetrates through a contradiction; that I am her slave, yet she is within me!

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  8. Love sets you free,it gives u wings to fly.

    I Love This Line...
    100% true

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  9. :) Quite the poet you are becoming.. Your creativity is adept.. Keep up the good work

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  10. Kavitha kavitha na superb ana onnum puriyala amma love nu enathu :PPP

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